Man on the Side

Wow, short but meaningful. I liked it.

Wow, for a first try, this is really good. I just don't feel the theme right now because I'm kind of heading on the other direction if you know what ...

Nice, reminds me of those suicide bombers/jet fighters. Good job. I like it.

Beautiful, it speaks of the harsh truths of the world. I just don't know what aja means.

The poem is too short and didn't really give out the emotion I think you wanted to convey. It left me hanging because the title really caught my attention.

You said this is about anorexia nervousa but somehow this reminds me of a cancer or drugs. Still it was fun to read, nice choice of words and very powerful.

Well, everyone has their views about life. Anyway, do you have time? Care to comment on my work?

And the new beginning is death? Well, if it is, I can't say I understand it but well, to each his/her own.